Relay-Version: version B 2.10 5/3/83; site utzoo.UUCP Posting-Version: version B 2.10 5/3/83; site hogpd.UUCP Path: utzoo!watmath!clyde!burl!ulysses!mhuxr!mhuxj!houxm!ahuta!hogpd!jrrt From: jrrt@hogpd.UUCP (R.MITCHELL) Newsgroups: net.sf-lovers Subject: More on Dilvish Message-ID: <468@hogpd.UUCP> Date: Wed, 9-Jan-85 14:41:34 EST Article-I.D.: hogpd.468 Posted: Wed Jan 9 14:41:34 1985 Date-Received: Fri, 11-Jan-85 22:46:04 EST Organization: American Bell, Holmdel NJ Lines: 42 ack in May, I reviewed DILVISH, THE DAMNED and THE CHANGING LAND for the local SF-club newsletter. In view of the recent comments on these two books, I present below that review: Imagine a heroic figure, endowed with tremendous physical abilities and magical talents. Add a hefty dose of tragic flaws. Stir in demons, ancient gods, and a powerful mage upon whom the hero has declared vengeance. Serve up with the usual trimmings of fair damsels, bizarre creatures, etc. What do you have? Well, if you do it right and you want a really depressing work, you have Moorcock's Elric of Melnibone series. If you do it wrong, without sufficient attention to the Grand Epic at hand, you get Zelazny's Dilvish books. In DILVISH, THE DAMNED and its sequel, THE CHANGING LAND, we follow Dilvish as he tracks down Jerelak, the evil magician who caused him to be tortured for 200 years in Hell. Naturally, Dilvish gets sidetracked, sent on false scents, etc., all in the fine tradition of heroic fantasy. Where Zelazny lets the reader down is in the details. Dilvish's universe is not painted with any clarity; I wanted to know a lot more about Hell, or how Dilvish got his "demonic metal horse, Black," or what the sociology of the land was like. The world never seems tangible. Zelazny takes the easy way out of the corners he puts Dilvish in. For instance, early in the first book, much is made about the invincibility of a foe's armor. The reader is led to expect an epic struggle in which the hero (through force of will, potent magic, and craftiness) manages to eke out a victory. No such luck. After Zelazny raises your expectations, you turn the page to find the battle already over, with the unsatisfying explanation that the armor wasn't so invulnerable after all. All the potentially interesting characters, even Dilvish, have two-dimensional personalities. The reader gets the impression that Dilvish is going through the motions, like a clockwork paladin, emotionlessly "fulfilling his destiny" without taking a personal interest in his actions. At least Elric brooded and fought against Fate; Dilvish just doesn't come across as a heroic figure, tragic or otherwise. If you like dark fantasy, stay away from these two books. Rob Mitchell {ihnp4,allegra}!hogpd!jrrt